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scholarships/2020/cnib/index.md

@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ title: "CNIB Scholarship Essay 2020"
 How will this scholarship change what it is to be blind for you as you pursue your post-secondary education?
 
 *Answer:*
-I have taken every opportunity of my short life refusing to be defined solely by any disability.
-This essay will focus more on my educational goals on their own merit.
+I have taken every opportunity of my short life to deny being defined solely by any disability.
+This essay will focus more on my educational goals and career aspirations on their own merit.
 
 I would love your support in accomplishing these goals!
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Of course, it is a exaggeration to say that this is the reason people give up pr
 but consider the extreme case:
 You have your phone location on at all times;
 you have a Alexa listening to everything you say at home;
-you text other using a company of service that is *openly* collecting all your message contents.
+you text others using a company or service that is *openly* collecting all your message contents.
 
 Would you want every text you have ever sent to be on the front page of the newspaper?
 What about every thing you have said in the privacy of your own home?
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Do you want just anyone to know where you were today?
 If any one person had access to all this information about you, it would likely make you uneasy.
 I know it makes me a bit nervous at least.
 
-One of my goals of my career is to build tools that would empower the individual.
+One of the primary goals of my career is to build tools that empower the individual.
 Tools that make the individual *more* independent, not less.
 These tools must be for the average consumer.
 They must appeal to a mass market without compromising the secure, private foundations.